The 'clean' layout of the previous post with both white and black backgrounds. The white one was annotated through my own concerns and from the response of people in the studio whom I roped in to looking.
- Make line-weight on the boxes lower (or the line art inside the boxes heavier to compensate) Going to make the line weight smaller. - and consistent.
- Address Leeland's massive eyebrows in the 2nd panel.
- make mouth black.
- additional detail.
- re draw the scissors 'Land is holding as they currently look like chop sticks.
- Don't use stenciled typeface, try a condensed bold that compensates the Lafayette font.
A good idea proposed from Will was to take away the box from the last panel, blow up the image and have the colour from the wall be the background colour.
I felt the artwork was lost amongst the black background but that's not to say this technique won't work for other pages.
The 'clean' layout of the previous post with both white and black backgrounds. The white one was annotated through my own concerns and from the response of people in the studio whom I roped in to looking.
I felt the artwork was lost amongst the black background but that's not to say this technique won't work for other pages.
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