Line Art

Ok, so this is the line work so far for my entry to the Northern Sequential Arts. A couple of things need amending such as the forth panel. It makes more sense to have Leeland in the beginning state of falling of his chair. That way, the lead into panel five does not seem so sudden.

To do:
- Leeland in state of falling.
- a robin missing from the fence
- as well as the small fire illuminating off said fence.
- Tittle (November in the North)
- Angry speech bubble. (And accompanying text because that's my appalling hand writing at the moment.)
- Leeland little 'oww' bubble and an arrow to point at the fire with a question mark suggesting that Brian is being a little hypercritical of his neighbors and their fireworks.