Crit Feedback

Summarised feedback from this mornings crits that I think went quite well. Will scan in the forms made by Kate F, Chris, Paul and Linds tonight:

• Lots of good development
  
• don't waffle on blog - use bullet points
• Suits the context (book: Stranger brief)
• Where will the comic book be sold? comic shops, supermarkets, book fairs ect?
• Two different styles work well together. My style is adaptable and doesn't pigeon hole me.
• Bit more experimentation with layout outs.
  

Additional comments:
-Readdress the type on the stranger brief. Currently it looks as if it's been badly cropped. There's enough white space to play around with the type to perhaps knock it down a little.

-Would be nice to have a range of possible out comes for the book brief.